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#406
06-03-2017, 09:09 AM
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Re: My adventure as a hawker
Very good story bro, hoping for more to come
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#409
06-03-2017, 12:37 PM
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Re: My adventure as a hawker
Bo Lui, bo sex, bo liao lehhhhh
Bro, have mercy and arrange some sex for those not paying laaaaa please! Hahaha. Btw, don't stop writing / posting! HUAT ahhhh
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#415
07-03-2017, 08:57 AM
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Re: My adventure as a hawker
I was dripping wet as I crawled out of the pond. I froze where I was, too afraid to join back into the fight.
It looked like a terrible mess, bodies piled on top on one another, everyone grunting and cursing. I was afraid someone would discover what I had done, or perhaps the box and the pen would just drop out of my pocket during the scuffle. We were making too much noise, there’s a residential estate barely a one hundred metres away. I saw another 2 men running up the stone steps, a look of urgency on their faces. I was about to run over to engage them but they were faster. They charged right into the orgy and pulled Spencer out. It appears as if they were not there to fight. They spoke to Spencer, pulling him back by his shirt which by then looked like a tube top. He could not be bothered, still determined to charge back into the fight. Like a rugby team, Spencer’s men suddenly managed to build up a wall of bodies and like a sweeping broom, they swept, pushed and kicked Johari and his men away from the sculptures. It happened so fast and all I could do was stare in horror. Spencer lifted the hammer and with three smooth strokes, smashed the remaining sculptures and finished off with the ammo pouch. Slam !..... Slam !!... Slam !!! …. Slam !! The sound of the demolition silenced the entire compound as if a spell had been cast. Everyone stared in shock at the damaged sculptures scattered all over the floor. Everyone’s eyes was searching the pieces and no one moved. Spencer went to kick away a few pieces before bending down to examine each piece before standing back up. He looked at Johari and he just shrugged his shoulder. One of the 2 guys that ran up tugged Spencer again. Man : The road block will not hold much longer, we need to go now…. The police are on their way up…. Someone made a complaint. Spencer did one last check on the pieces on the floor before gesturing to his men to leave. Like smoke dissipating in the wind, Spencer and his guys scattered into the night and we never heard from them again. Johari’s phone rang and he answered, speaking briefly before hanging up. Johari : Ok, we got to go…..now … I’ll try to get Gabriel… there’s nothing in the sculptures..…. I saw Bill leaning against the side of a pillar and I hurried over. He had a deep cut on his left forearm, blood was flowing freely and his face was badly bruised. Jake : Oh fuck… fuck… Bill : Don’t make a big fuss… I’m fine… Jake : You don’t look fine to me…. He unwrapped his fist and we used that to apply pressure on the wound. He would definitely need a few stitches to fix that. Bill turned and walked away slowly and I kept up with him. We went onto one of the trails that will lead us down the hill to the Hort park. He kept asking me to leave him alone but I couldn’t bring myself to. Jake : You’re squirting blood…. How you expect me to leave you ?? By the time we got to the Hort park, Bill was walking a lot slower. We attracted some stares from joggers and a few offered to help. Jake : It’s ok… it’s ok… he fell, I’m bringing him to the doctor… I don’t know how many times I repeated that answer as I racked my brains for a solution. Bill saw a bench and he sat down, saying that he needed a break. I reached for my phone and I was thinking who I could call. Gabriel and Ben , they’re both not in town. I scrolled down the list and the only logical choice was Lucy. I dialled her number and she picked up on the fourth ring, answering in her usual flirty manner, but her attitude changed totally when I told her what happened. Jake : We can’t take a cab, he’s got blood all over…do you all have some triad clinic or something you all go to? To get patched up or something ? Lucy just kept quiet over the phone for a couple of seconds before saying she will come get us. Bill asked me to go but I told him I have help coming. Bill : Who ? Jake : ERrr… my parents… I asked them to pick us up…. We’ll send you to a clinic or something… Bill : No need… just drop me off back in Joo chiat. It was a 45 minutes wait and I brought some water for Bill as we sat in the park. I tried really hard not to touch the box in my pocket as I talked to Bill about Lucy . What was their relationship like ? Why did they break up ? How was Lucy like ? I peppered Bill with questions but I got no answer from him. It was either a smile, a giggle or just plain shaking of his head. Bill : I just fell for someone I shouldn’t have.. that’s all there is .. We were silent for a while, both our eyes were looking down towards the pavement. A pair of legs appeared, a beautiful fair pair of legs with running shoes. I was the first to look up at the owner of the pair of legs. Lucy had on a casual pair of shorts and a plain grey t-shirt. She walked slowly towards us. She never even looked at me. I look at Bill, he was shocked beyond words as Lucy walked towards him with trembling lips. Bill tried to cover his arm and wipe off the blood stains before standing up. By then Lucy had gotten right in front of us. Her eyes looked a little watery as she glared at Bill before looking at me. Jake : Lucy….i … Smack !... I slap hit me before I could say anything more. Lucy : HOW DARE YOU !!... You said it was just to protect a place !!! Bill : Lucy…. Lucy gave Bill a glare and he knew better than to try and speak again. I’ve never seen Lucy so angry before. That raw emotion on her face was the most real and unpretentious expression I have seen on Lucy. That mix of pain and anguish as she looked at Bill. Lucy punched Bill lightly on his chest as a tear rolled down her cheek. Lucy : You think you’re still young ?? … do you ?? Bill kept still, his eyes refused to meet Lucy Lucy hit him again, a little harder this time with another punch . Lucy : Answer me …. You think you’re still some hot shot in the organisation ?? do you ?? Lucy’s lips shook and I saw both her cheeks streaked with her tears as she hit Bill for the 3rd time. Lucy : Answer me…..You think you’re still the young fighter you were 10 years ago ?? sobzz… answer me… sobzz… Bill answered Lucy alright. He answered her. Bill : I am still that man Lucy….. I am still that man….. Lucy’s teeth were clenched and I could see tears dripping off her chin and the bottom of her cheeks. Bill : I’m not the young man….. I’m not the hot shot….. I’m not the fighter…… but I’m still the same man that loves you… Holy fuck. I almost shed a tear as I staggered a step backwards. Lucy’s shoulder slouched, her stance softened, the tough exterior she had on all along melted away . For that brief moment, Lucy was that little girl again. I knew it was the right moment then for me to walk away. And I did. I turned and walked off as Lucy leaned forward and into Bill’s arms. As fast as my legs could carry, I got out of the Hort park and hailed myself a cab. I reached home, showered and got into my bed at 1.30am
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#416
07-03-2017, 08:59 AM
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Re: My adventure as a hawker
22nd Feburary 2015
Sunday 1.35am I carefully lifted the box and look at the pen inside, looking at the intricate details and wordings carved into the body of the pen. I wrapped it up properly and kept it away. That would surely come in useful one day. 6.30am I was back at the noodle stall and my muscles ached , I think I had a visible bruise on my face and Kate came over to ask me what happened and where did I go the day before. There was no point lying to her about it and I came clean. Her eyes widened and she hit me several times, cursing at me for not telling her about it. Kate : HOW could you !!!! How could you not tell me !!!! She stormed off and ignored me for the rest of the day. 10pm Johari sent a picture of the sculptures at Bukit Chandu to the group chat. Everything had been replaced and touched up. With a few construction cones and signage indicating restoration works, there was no trouble at all getting the replacement done. Gabriel was both puzzled and upset that his grandfather’s legacy was not found at the site. He says he would get to the bottom of the matter and he thanked everyone for our help. 23 Feburary 2015 Monday 10.30am I thought I would try my luck getting in touch with Lucy to ask about Bill but there was no reply from her. I have yet to see Bill around the coffee shop that couple of days too, probably resting at home, wherever that may be. Kate came over right before I left the coffee shop with my parents. Kate : I manage to get another chance to talk to King… you interested ? Jake : Yes.. yes… of course… Kate : See you later at 4pm… we’ll meet straight at his shop. 4.15pm Kate was 15 minutes late. 4.30 pm I dropped Kate a couple of messages before I tried dialling her phone but it was switched off. This is weird. Kate was seldom late when she meets up with me and going uncontactable like this was virtually unheard off. It’s not like I knew her for the longest time but she’s not someone who would just go off the grid like this. By 4.45pm, I was starting to get worried. I decided to go on ahead to King’s shop. King’s shop is separated into 2 as mentioned earlier , one sells everything for the living, and the other sells everything for the dead. I asked the staff where King was and he gave me a suspicious look before saying he’s in the office. Jake : He’s expecting me…. I mean us… actually there’s one more… but I don’t know where is she… The staff just pointed down the rows of shelves at the back of the shop. I knew it. I knew King would do this to us. As I walked down the shelves stocked with offerings for the deceased , I felt as if there were several pairs of eyes on me. That weird creepy feeling of someone watching you. I walked pass neatly arranged rows of paper iphone and Ipads, laptops, hardisk. Even paper VR googles. Anything you would possibly find in the world of the living, chances are King has one version for the dead. I reached the old timber door with a large square glass panel in the middle and I knocked on the door. Jake : Hello ? … hello ? I could hear voices inside the room. I tried the door knob but it was locked. I knocked on the door again. Jake : King…. Hello… King ? The voices got a little louder. It sounded like people wrapping up their conversation. There was some shuffling, chairs being shifted and when the bolt for the lock snapped opened, I jumped backwards a little. The sudden snap gave me a shock, being in such a creepy shop did not help either. The door opened and when I laid eyes on the people inside King’s office, I realised the shock from the lock was nothing. It was nothing compared to seeing Ah Keong, Suwen and King staring at me. Ah Keong : What are you doing here ? I paused. I was about to say I came together with Kate when I saw something familiar on King’s table. It was Kate’s phone. King : What are you doing here Jake ? …. You need something ?? My heart started thumping and I tried to think of an excuse. Jake : I… I needed to get something for a army friend who just passed away…. The 3 of them kept their eyes on me, no doubt unconvinced about what I just said. Jake : I just thought maybe I could get a discount you know…. Since we sort of know each other …. ?? 5 seconds passed and we remained staring at each other. It was such a bad lie that I was sure they saw right through me. Kate’s phone was right there on the fucking table. Yet she was nowhere in the room. I never expected Suwen to speak first ahead of King and Ah Keong. And when she did, I turned on my heels and I ran. Suwen : Get him !.... get him !... I tore up the concrete floor as I sprinted as fast as I could towards the exit and into the staircase. I jumped 3, 4 steps at a time, desperate to get out of the compound. I literally flew towards the nearest bus stop and hopped onto the 1st bus to arrive, panting and catching my breathe as I looked out the window, trying to see if they caught up with me. Not good. This is not good. The bus barely went forward one bus stop when my phone rang. It was a number I don’t recognised. Jake : Hello ? Suwen : Jake… it’s me… Suwen… Her voice was a stark contrast from before. It sounded gentle and sweet. Suwen : We are all reasonable people…so let’s talk things through. There was a short pause before she went on again. Suwen : Kate is not even your real girlfriend… Another pause followed. Suwen : Why are you wasting your time on her ?? It was obvious she was taking instructions from someone else. It had to be either Ah Keong or King. Suwen : I mean it Jake… we can pay you… just look the other way….pretend you never see anything… Jake : Let her go.. Suwen : I can’t… Suwen was pretty insistent that we should talk things through. Jake : You grabbed Kate… what assurance do I have you wouldn’t do the same to me… Suwen : Don’t be crazy… why would we do that… we didn’t grab Kate… we just need her as a guest for a while… After some deliberation, I agreed to meet with Suwen but only if I get to speak with Kate. King got on the line and repeated what Suwen had already told me. King : Stay out of this Jake.. It’s for your own good. Jake : I want to speak with Kate… He hung up on me. I alighted a few stops later and my phone rang again. Jake ; Hello ? Kate : JAKE!!.. JAKE!!.. TELL Gab….ahhh
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#417
07-03-2017, 09:01 AM
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Re: My adventure as a hawker
Jake : Kate… Kate !!..
There was some commotion on the other end of the line before Suwen came back on. Suwen : 5k…Jake… we’ll pay you 5k… cash… just walk away… from all of this… I tried to calm myself down. The logical thing to do would be to tell Gabriel or Ben and their game would be over. Let them handle it among themselves. I would have done exactly that . That would have been Jake’s decision but I could not bring myself to do it. Somehow over the course of that few weeks, something changed inside me. Suwen : Jake… 8k… our final offer…. Take it… I mean it… take it… we’ll pay you cash…. Just walk away…. Jake : let her go … Suwen : What ? 12k ? …. Do we have a deal ? …. Ok… ok… I’ll see you in a bit. Thanks for agreeing to our offer Jake… I see you in a while… I could hear Kate screaming in the background as Suwen pretended as if we had a deal. Suwen : we’ll go get the money and pass it to you .... we'll arrange a time and place.... ok.... thanks... Jake : WHAT… what ?? hey… hey !!! Then she hung up on me. What a fucking bitch. What the fuck was she thinking ? She must be thinking she could keep the money for herself while pushing the blame on me. Keong and King would think I took the money. She’s fucking pinning it all on me. What would Kate think when she hears that I accepted the deal ? I’ll quickly get in touch with Gabriel, tell him everything, that would prove my innocence. I hit Gabriel’s number and right before I hit dial, I realised perhaps there was another way. Another easier way. I simply sent Suwen the message. ‘I know about you and Matthew’ 30 seconds later, Suwen sent me her reply. Suwen msg : Let’s meet in private… 9.30pm Block 85 market at Bedok. I sat near the NTUC and ate my noodles as I waited. 9.35pm Suwen appeared. She had changed into something casual from the dress I saw her in earlier. She looked just like the hot mother that had just put her kids to bed. Her legs, looked similar to Tiffany except that her skin lack that radiant youthful shine Tiffany had. Smooth and hairless, it reminded me of the time I ran my tongue up Tiffany’s legs and hearing her moan sensually thinking it was Roland. I wonder how Suwen’s moans would sound like. Suwen wore a pale pink bra with white singlet, the holes on her denim shorts looked as if it was specially made for the side of her shapely and firm bottom. It’s not too tight, there just that little bit of gap such that when she walked, you can see the bounce of her butt cheeks. At late thirties, with a figure like that, she is the ultimate milf fantasy anyone could wish for. Seeing Suwen up close sent some raw emotions down my groin as I watch her sit down in front of me and crossed her legs. Several uncles drinking beer a couple of tables away were looking at her too. Suwen don’t look her age, she maintained and kept herself well, if you asked me, I would say she could easily pass off as someone in her early thirties, perhaps late twenties with her make up on. She put her phone and purse on the table and I could see she was very nervous. Suwen : How did you know about Matthew and me ? I did not answer her question. Jake : Help me get Kate out.. Suwen : I can’t… Ah Keong and King has her…. I’m just at the wrong place at the wrong time… Jake : What were you doing there then ? Suwen admitted she went there to borrow money from King. She wanted to get out of her marriage with Terry. Kate turned up to meet King and Ah Keong happened to be there. They didn’t know I would be joining them Suwen : Kate was quarrelling with them, then it just happened. They didn’t plan this… they just decided to grab her Jake : Where is Kate ? … Suwen : I don’t know… I really don’t know.. Suwen was more interested in how I got to know about her and Matthew rather than where Kate was. Suwen : How did you know ? who told you ?? ! Jake : I saw the videos…. Those in the hotels… from way back… Suwen : NO… no way… it’s not possible… I redirected the conversation, it’s important for me to be in control where we were headed. Jake : It’s there… imagine what Ah Keong would do…. Or perhaps… I threw a wild guess into the wind. Jake : What Tiffany would do if she knew Terry was not her father ?? … Suwen : She is Terry’s daughter !! She insisted quite strongly but I still threw in some doubt. Jake : Are you that sure ?? … sure enough to take a test ?? That silenced Suwen up completely. So I might be right after all. Suwen : I really don’t know where Kate is… Jake : Then you’re going to help me find out… Suwen : how ?? Jake : I’m sure you have your ways… She looked away into the distance and kept quiet as she wet her lips with the tongue before brushing back her thick and silky hair. Jake : Ask Terry…. He could go talk to King… it’s that simple… Suwen hesitated for a couple of seconds before answering me. Suwen : It’s never that simple when you ask Terry for something…. Why do you think I’m getting out of this marriage !... I sipped on the soup of my noodles as I watch Suwen rest her cheek on her palm , sighing and thinking of a way to get out of this mess. Then she said something that perk my ears. Suwen : I know King is a little interested in me…. he once peeped at me changing at our house warming once… My cock stirred and a smile slowly appeared on my face. Jake : There…… there…. That’s an idea… Suwen : It’s not an idea ….. what do you expect me to do… go change in front of him ?? Jake : haha… maybe you give him something more to…. Look at ?? Suwen hit the table a little hard and drew the attention of the few tables nearby as she glared at me. Jake : It’s your choice….my suggestion… have sex with Terry…. Or something… then accidentally let King peep…. Get him aroused…. He’s a old man… it’s not hard to satisfy him… you know the rest… Suwen ; Who do you take me for !! Jake : I just want to get Kate out.. Suwen : I’m not having sex with Terry…. We’ve not been intimate for years !!! Suwen whispered that harshly to me and I could feel my erection pushing against my boxers. I don’t know what was going through my mind. It had to be from the noodles I had as I offered her another suggestion. I don’t know why I said it. I really don’t It just came out of my mouth. Jake : Perhaps ….. I can pretend to be Terry …. Suwen : You.. Suwen paused mid sentence and stopped talking. We just looked at each other without a word at the hawker centre. She was thinking. Considering. She needed that extra push. Jake : And… you can keep that 12k you said over the phone… I watched Suwen swallow a gulp of saliva and with that ever slight gentle movement of her head in a unsure manner. She nodded. ……………………
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#418
07-03-2017, 09:45 AM
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Re: My adventure as a hawker
woooo Jake now is the mastermind in control
 camping for more plot 
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sent me an angel with a pair of lovely legs in hosiery
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#419
07-03-2017, 10:45 AM
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Re: My adventure as a hawker
Fascinating story line; we have both elements of 无间道 & 黑社会 in the plot.
Bro ilikeoldchangke, sorry but this style of writing seems to be more in line with another good writer, pussluver. You guys exchanging notes? Anyway, I saw from the previous story involving James and Kate that you will be doing some light hearted love story as your main piece this year so I gathered that this is not it??  So many more stories to come this year? 
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#420
07-03-2017, 01:07 PM
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Re: My adventure as a hawker
Bro. Puss is puss n lock is lock.
Both r good n hope to read more stories from them. Cheers
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